this is not a comment and it's not even a poem it's just a way of saying thank you for sharing this piece of writing. i may not be the most understanding and for sure i don't have your romantic experience but when i see good writing i close my eyes and i try to see it happening "her soul was dripping from his mouth" so violent, so cruel, so frail a big face with big round eyes and a big round smile from which a glowing white-pink liquid with thick consistency is slowly dripping down this ghost-like creature mouth. there is something nostalgic about this moment as the creature doesn't agree to its actions, but it's in his nature to eat somebody's soul, somebody's essence. there is also some sort of perversion as the creature enjoys its meal almost having an orgasmic experience as it tilts its head backwards opens its mouth fully closes its eyes and it devours every flavor of this soul like a good steak raised on a special diet prepared medium-rare imported from japan this soul tastes just like a wagyu steak probably even better it melts in your mouth and it has the most delicate texture and the creature knows that it does something wrong to devour somebody's soul somebody's essence that's where the perversion comes from as the creature loves this too much to just let it go to maybe become vegetarian. the same way the creature enjoys its meal i enjoy your writing tilt my head backwards close my eyes and i devour it feeling ashamed that i might get caught in this web of fantasies.
this is not a comment
ReplyDeleteand it's not even a poem
it's just a way of saying
thank you
for sharing this piece of writing.
i may not be the most understanding
and for sure i don't have your romantic experience
but when i see good writing
i close my eyes and i try to see it happening
"her soul was dripping from his mouth"
so violent, so cruel, so frail
a big face
with big round eyes
and a big round smile
from which
a glowing white-pink liquid
with thick consistency
is slowly dripping
down this ghost-like creature mouth.
there is something nostalgic
about this moment
as the creature doesn't agree to its actions,
but it's in his nature
to eat somebody's soul,
somebody's essence.
there is also some sort of perversion
as the creature enjoys its meal
almost having an orgasmic experience
as it tilts its head backwards
opens its mouth fully
closes its eyes
and it devours every flavor of this soul
like a good steak
raised on a special diet
prepared medium-rare
imported from japan
this soul tastes just like a wagyu steak
probably even better
it melts in your mouth
and it has the most delicate texture
and the creature knows that it does something wrong
to devour somebody's soul
somebody's essence
that's where the perversion comes from
as the creature loves this too much
to just let it go
to maybe become vegetarian.
the same way the creature enjoys its meal
i enjoy your writing
tilt my head backwards
close my eyes
and i devour it
feeling ashamed
that i might get caught
in this web of fantasies.
Good ending!
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